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Field of Dreams... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Field of Dreams... "If you build it I will come" thoughts entering my mind from your words to me, this day in my field of dreams... It began a while back, clashes of words White Knights and Dark Days parts of me stolen tuned out, turned in imposters, trying to be me. But even I have a hard time doing that... Displaced, moved about building my walls adding the gates opening to friends, one by one they enter, some leave, all return... words of theirs, touching my heart washing away the hurt inspiring words of my own to release my spirit... gathering them, forming a fortress to protect me, from all outside building upon these friendships their thoughts and words comfort the distressed me their smiles and hugs reverse the saddened me and their encouragement supports the happy me... and without words, thoughts, I would remain in a state of sorrow... and be the lost me... M 9*2k |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen as always, touching and beautiful. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Nicely done, I realy like the way that you use the different parts of you in their concept here . Enjoyed it . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
its great to know you have such supportive friends.....and we here care sooo much about you as well!! i like all your different "me's", but your happy one is the best! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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