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In The Soft Dawning

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Marge Tindal
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In The Soft Dawning
~*Marge Tindal*~

Brush my cheek with one light kiss
softly feathered in moments of bliss
Touch my cheek with feathered sigh
long after the moon has gone by
Take me here and now
to passionate heights
In the soft dawning
after the night




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 09-08-2000 08:00 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Marge...Oh thank you for this beautiful
poetry kiss this morning!!! It's just what
the poet prince ordered!!!!  **Angel Wing
Hugs**
Beth
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~Marge,
Very beautiful indeed.
And Very Romantic!!~


~Cherie~
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Sweet and passionate and oh so emotive - just the way I like it - thankyou marge it realy lightened up the day .

L.of.L. Tom .


Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -
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4 posted 09-08-2000 08:22 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Marge, no one knows how to wake up more than you do!!! Thank you for reminding us of the simple pleasure of dawn.


Kathleen

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Marge,
this was gentle butterfly kisses, awe inspiring.
Kethry


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but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-
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Hi Marge ... your simplicity shines bright here ... very nice.
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Oh Marge so tender and romantic.
Love,
Juls
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Kisses upon eagles wing
Caressing your cheeks so soft
A song is left for you to sing
As my feather sends your heart aloft

Luna's light smiles upon you
As you awake to midnights kiss
Awaiting the kiss of morning dew
Wanting to send you home in heavens bliss

Honeybee
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Simply beautiful, Marge!  What a way to describe the feeling of love  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams


X Angel
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10 posted 09-08-2000 12:16 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

wow
I will believe in fairy tales again, I will.
This was lovely and made my heart yearn..
*sigh*
great job
~Heather
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11 posted 09-08-2000 12:46 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

marge,form the title i KNEW this was going to be a beautiful poem and i was not disappointed

Sudhir Iyer
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Oh! This is beautiful ...

great, great work...

regards,
sudhir
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Short, Sweet and beautiful Marge!  
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Very beautiful, Marge! I love it!

Denise
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ButterfliesDC~
Hey !  I like dat der 'poet prince' idea !

Beth~
Thank you.  Glad you enjoyed.

AngelSwing~
Thank you.  I was just emoting all over the morning !

Kathleen~
What can I say ?
I'm an early-morning riser ...
or just an all-nighter ! Tee-Hee !

MAMiller~
I appreciate your reply.

Juliet~
Hi, gal !  Thanks so much.

MarkB~
Oh, no ya' don't, cowboy !
You're not getting rid of me that easily !
Tee-Hee-Hee !

Melissa~
Yeah !  Thanks, girlfriend !

XAngel~
Got those fairy tales waking, gal !
Believe - believe - believe !

Kaile~
Thank you. I hope I never disappoint ya'.

Sudhir~
Hugs, my sweet friend.

DarkAngel~
Well, it was a morning quickie.
*Wink*

Denise~
Thank you, hon.
I love that you love it !
~*Marge*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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Marge~
Your kind of poetry is just what I need to read right now.
Lovely, romatic and oh a little steamy  
Thanks hon
Tracie xx


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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Marge, there is that "feathering" time, just after the night...those few suspended moments. You have brought them tenderly into my mind with this treasure. Lovely writing.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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Marge~

*Sigh* . . . oh to behold the dawning of a new day.  What a way to get one started!!  Sounds perfect.  You have a great talent for capturing those memorable moments in time my friend.  Beautiful writing.    

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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Okay Marge, another tender piece you have penned.  Just lovely.  
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Tracie~
Pleased to see you caught the steam.
Thanks, hon.

Claire~
Glad to have stirred a memory or two.
Thanks for letting me know.

LoneWolf~
To know you liked the 'capture'
is more than enough for me.
Thank you.

Eloise~
I like knowing that you liked it.
Thanks, gal.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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Waking to the sweetness of love...
does it get any better than that?
"Have a good day" is redundant afterward, eh?
Thanks Marge for another thrill...


bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"

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Marge

Beautiful - just beautiful.  You are the best!

                    didi
Marge Tindal
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Daniel~
You read me so well.  Thank you.

DiDi~
Thank you for thinking so.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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{~,^}
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