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linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
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0 posted 2000-09-08 05:11 AM


Missing You


When sunlight taps my window
You’re the first thing on my mind
The last thing that I think of
When I’m pulling down the blind

As I lay me down to sleep
You waltz with me in dreams
We dance together in the night
Amongst the soft moonbeams

Counting moments you’re away
With the clock that’s in my heart
Let me be with you always
Let us never be apart


© Copyright 2000 Linda Munday - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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1 posted 2000-09-08 05:13 AM


As I lay me down to sleep
You waltz with me in dreams
We dance together in the night
Amongst the soft moonbeams

....

Now this is a double treat...

great work, again...

regards,
sudhir

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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2 posted 2000-09-09 10:00 PM


Your flow is excellent, how did I miss this one!


Kathleen


Mike
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3 posted 2000-09-10 12:05 PM


Enjoyed your poem.  Nicely written.
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4 posted 2000-09-10 12:08 PM


Linda~
This is so romantically lovely.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Beth
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5 posted 2000-09-10 05:27 AM



~Very sweet and thoughtfull. I like this!!~


~Cherie~

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