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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-09-08 01:04 AM


I breath in and out
and feel the doubt
where once I felt
so confident
I feel a breeze
from some disease
that seems to have me
captured
The discontent
has caught my grip
unmercifully I hold on
to it, if nothing else
Last night I dreamt but
then I sent for the archangel
to bring me peace
to this distraught place
I am in.
I breath in and out
rebriefed by the sound
of yet another day
Misery seems to be my friend
but I so often would befriend
another, but misery calls
rose's fade and I must persuade
myself to be not hindered
by the changing of this time


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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2000-09-08 07:08 AM


SweetRosebud~

May the day bring
the breezes that place
a smile from a friend
upon your face.


~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-09-08 07:29 AM


Friendly smiles await you here
Hugs and silent knowings as well
Come let us all fill your heart with cheer
Pain and misery are not the place to dwell



Lift your petals and kiss the dew
Raise your head and wipe the tears
Roses are not meant to be so blue
So rise to the sun and forget your fears

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-09-08 08:38 AM


Hey! I see we came to Passions about the same time. I loved the angel theme and the reference to the rose.



Kathleen


Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-09-08 12:36 PM


Marge thanks so much, you always touch my heart with your words

Mark you brought tears to my eyes your passion and your words really know how to
show compassion thanks for caring

Irish rose what can I say you know how sentimental us Rose's are hopefully I feel feel more radiant today, the sun will shine down upon me and open my buds instead of showing my thorns.

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