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rojogrande Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 29Fullerton, CA, USA |
Lightning flashing Thunder rolling disturbing bowling alleys & streetlights No space FLASHCRASH!! babies crying women angry men laughing drinking death knocking parties continue life goes on Why? disaster No one cares? I can hear a child whimpering yet still men only laugh Woman is mad bottles clinking or is it souls? Souls like glass...seethrough solid real useful easily shattered What is the soul? Is it the heart? Love burns there deepest desires fears dreams or is it the conscience? Right and Wrong live here Right and Wrong? Right to mourn loss but disaster strikes life goes on surely the soul is not there In the heart? Children die War torn streets Couples divide surely the soul is not there like glass...real like a glass, half full? or half empty? maybe fully gone I sit 15 feet above resting waters parties continue life continues but now disaster is the talk like media we dwell The rain has stopped Problems gone Right? fires still rage in the mountains Nature fights for her life Along with firemen The soul... Ask yourself Is your glass half full? [This message has been edited by rojogrande (edited 09-08-2000).] |
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rojogrande Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 29Fullerton, CA, USA |
Pleas forgive the name of the poem as posted. The actual name is Half Full. Thanks. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hey rojogrande!!! this is quite a thoughtful and provocative piece! half full? half empty? clinking glasses and what is a soul??? great stuff here! i really like this... thanks for an interesting read!  i'll be looking forward to reading more of your work.oh, and btw, you can click on the edit icon and still "fix" the title if you want... limited time offer, i hear... only first 24 hours or something like that after you post..!!  ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a good apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RojoGrande~ You've sent an avalanche of thoughts plumetting down the page ... quite intoxicating. *You can go to the little pen and pencil Edit icon on your poem and change the title. Enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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