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somewhere in a universal probability we are already lovers
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somewhere in a universal probability we are already lovers |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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Who could predict the Bee Gees? or the precise moment of a blowing horn a chaotic crash or even the direction of piss? Spinning particles stop appearing or never existed at all perhaps until we looked to see where they were and might be going young Heisenberg foretold it some options are always open like the one I like best that somewhere in a universal probability we are already lovers Hate is a dead thing. Who of you would be a tomb? -Kahlil Gibran |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Let me assure you WE ARE NOT!!!!!!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Would that that were so...but what a glorious thought to hold in my heart...I truly like this |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Local Rebel, Your work is always so original in style and theme. I had to smile at The Bee Gees reference.  ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
well if I am not writing anything you sure are making up for it with all the great ones you are writing love this one........makes me smile |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"some options are always open" now.. THIS is Truth!... isn't it? Life is full of options, that's for sure... what IS Truth? *grin*.. but, seriously, though... Rebellious One... somewhere in a universal probability of it all... i know, this verse you've written is some very fine poetry straight from the heart of a very fine poet..... and that, poetfriend, i respect so very much! Thank you for sharing all your insight and wonder!  you're thumpin' elth![This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
quite interesting ... universal probabilities also say i never read this, you never wrote this, and we all have been lovers at one time or another ... perplexing perspective ... i like My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
MA -- In the event in another universal probability you did read this and didn't like it -- (raspberry)-- lol JK... and interesting take you took my friend... thanks for reading and your comments.. Doreen -- thanks , and yep in another universe I probably am something else.. lol  Corazon -- if it made you smile then it was worth the time!! Claire -- the Bee Gees popped out of Heisenberg -- Paula -- thanks kid..! Deere -- for once -- I'm in complete and total agreement buddy -- lol -- but -- there's still a chance for you and Toerag..!! lol |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is tight!!! Dang spiffy! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
and I was a mermaid and probably drowned you after I sang my siren song to lure you in... too cool ~Heather |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Reb, you know I'm LOL at Deer's response... and swooning with the rest of the ladies... kharmic, it is...and I too, adored the BG's moment... |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
shadows, angel, sunshine... thanks... glad you like it -- opens up possibilities don't it?? |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is most incredible way of thought... so original and wonderful.... great work, local rebel... regards, sudhir |
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