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This I Promise
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This I Promise |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
To love you with my every breathe To cherish each moment we share To give to you all that I am In everything I do To live each day like its our first To listen even when you arent saying a thing To hear with my heart not just with my mind And try to understand To wake each day with you in my mind To take you with me the last thing at night To hold you close all through the hours When we are far apart All of this and more than I can say All of this and more mere words cant convey All the love in my heart all the days of my life This I promise you I love you...always will |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, Paula. Almost sounds like wedding vows. Hope love stays so happy for you. Catalinamoon |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Paula, Ah, if everyone could be loved just like this....simply beautiful, dear friend. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
these are easy promises to keep when a heart finds true contentment same as when a poet finds true inspiration ... makes me smile to see you experiencing both  take care poet friend jm |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Such beautiful words you pen! Being the romantic that I am, I love this! This could be a poem presented to a groom by the bride at their wedding  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Beautiful thoughts, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Heart spoken emotion Paula...your love shows in every word...my hope is that you receive as lovingly as you give~ Beautiful work~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
There's nothing I can say about this beautiful poem - that the 6 above me haven't already said - it is a very beautiful poem you've created |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula.... You speak your thoughts like an angel, and they are always so true to your heart. It's good to see the happiness shining through for you, for always.... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
What man could read this and not be moved? To have love of this magnitude, solely for your own, is magnificent. To be told that it is so... icing on the cake! Beautiful, Paula. Trev. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful thoughts |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Paula~ What a loving and tender piece...well done Lovely to read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula, this poem was promising and joyous and sensitive and loving and absolutely stunning. Thank you for posting it. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Many promises yet I know they are not a burden when love guides the way...beautiful thoughts...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Y'all just overwhelm me with your responses catalinamoon...I too hope this lasts...it just feels so very right...thank you Thank you Michael...your sweet words always touch my heart Janet Marie...hey girl welcome...thanks for reading this...I always treasure your responses Melissa...I never look at it like that...its just that I wanted him to know how deep this love goes...thanks Marge...no more than he deserves dear lady Holly...I am truly I am and its glorious Bill...thank you sir...coming from the romantic that you are this is quite a compliment Sunny girl...thanks me twin...you know where my heart lies and you are a true friend Trev...he is told each and every day that he is the one Trev...I just hope he BELIEVES Mark...thank you sir Tracie...thank you for taking the time to read Kethry...why thank you for all your words of praise...means a lot coming from you. James...no problems at all to keep these...thank you |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Paula! Denise |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is so wonderful and so touching...im keeping this one in my library....oh..i know these feelings...and you put them to words so perfectly! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Denise thank you for your sweet compliments Dawn what an honour you give to me to add this to your library...thanks |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Paula....this was great!! I liked it alot!! Julie :) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Paula, This is absolutely precious! It is a greeting card, not of paper, but of thoughts of love, from your heart to his. A delightful poem Liz |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I enjoy reading your poems lately Keep it up |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JulieAnn...thank you I appreciate that you like what I have written Liz...Oh yes most definitely to his heart...he is my world. Vandana...thank you |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Paula, what lovely feelings you share with us. This is beautiful. *sighs* |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Paula, This was very soft and romatic as is your heart. You are such a caring, loving woman....one who deserves an equal to you in the emotion department. Warmest wishes and soft smiles to you.... Jenn E |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Paula. what a beautiful expression of love Would like to use this on a card for my beloved of 43 years. It is as true today as the day we were married so long ago Your saved me the time to pen one of my own.....Thank you for sharing........ .......nona |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Paula, What a lovely poem Isn't it wonderful when you know you met the missing part of your soul you have been searching for? I am sending this to my love.. you have described what I feel so well rp25 |
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CAMERON UNDERWOOD Junior Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 26 |
I loved this one Paula. This one brought a tear to my eyes, and a smile as I see her face in my day dreams. It makes me think of my pumpkin (Kelley) and how much I miss her, and much I love her. True Love is an amazing thing. Never give up. If you know in your heart that they are the one; thats all you need. If it's meant to be; fait will take care of the rest. Love Ya Paula, and take care. Sleepless in Portland |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Paula-Truely lovely words and a lovely promise. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is one that I would also love to share with my soul-mate, it describes completely the way I feel about him! Thanks for sharing a gem! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I just want to say that I am honored that any of you would choose to send this to someone you love...and please please do Kitkat...thank you for your sweet words Jenn E...believe me I have found the one and he is love Nona...I am honored that you would choose top send this to your mate rp25...yes he is the one...the one I have waited for...Im glad you can send it on Cameron...never never give up hope...if you love her she will know |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Gemini...thank you Debbie...please do share |
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