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JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-09-07 12:26 PM


And for anyone who lives in CO. you know about the weather here.....can't bet on it...unless your gonna bet it will change in five minutes!! LOL  


I saw a shimmer
on the ground
bent down to find
a shiny new coin
delighting in the joys
of another day
need to get outside
and play...
finish up this cleaning later
sunshine waits...
to me it caters...
shut down the internet
put on my shoes
feed the pet
find my keys
lock the door
I step outside
just my luck...
it starts to pour
the weather man said
mostly sunny...
I'll call him up
to say his joke isn't funny
weather men are such a pain
can't they just say
partly cloudy with a chance of rain?

Julie :)



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LngJhnAg
Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
1 posted 2000-09-07 12:37 PM


Julie Ann - I suspect the weatherman knew you personally, and while thinking of you, realized that every day is sunny and great.  Just a theory of course.
JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
2 posted 2000-09-07 12:45 PM


Thank you,,,such a compliment you are too kind....

Julie :)



Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-09-08 09:27 AM


Yep.....the weatherman knows how to let us down alright.  Great read and as for today....sending you sunshine with passing clouds and a chance of LIQUID SUNSHINE.
Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-09-08 12:45 PM


Tremendous poem... JulieAnn...

muchly enjoyed...

regards,
sudhir

poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
5 posted 2000-09-08 12:59 PM


well the weather Never seems to change here...always sunny with a chance of sunny!
liked this!
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
6 posted 2000-09-08 05:25 PM


Thank you...I will be watching for your package of liquid sunshine...PLEASE send it express...no but it has cleared up nicely here so we have plenty now....

Sud....thank you, you are ssooo kind....much appreciated...

Dawn...I am gald you have constant sunshine I just came from somewhere like that....but I kind of like the rain sometimes just not when it interfers with my plans....



Julie :)



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