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She Breathes the Winds of Liberty
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She Breathes the Winds of Liberty |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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straining at the ropes that bind her < !signature-->that hold her an unwilling captive the young filly struggles for freedom the far-off places call to her on the breezes enflaming her desire to taste freedom she stops fighting and stands motionless head lifted to breathe the winds of liberty in deep she knows somehow she must be free somehow she must loose these fetters so she can fly like the eagles so she can race over the uneven ground at a biting pace, and just run! resuming her passioned fight she can feel the ropes starting to loosen her freedom bound by but a thread now must not cease the struggle must be free must leave her demons far behind in a cloud of dust and sorrow there! freedom! it's hers! and run she does as far and as fast as she can go never stopping to rest never slowing never ever looking back "Our life, exempt from public haunt, finds tongues in trees, books in the running brooks, sermons in stones, and good in everything." --William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hey there, ya lil filly! I see that you've opened your horizons and now see that the world awaits you. Watch out world because here comes a lady to be reckoned with. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
For some reason this reminded me of the struggles of my teenage years...wanting to be free from the confines of parents etc....anyway...that is what I got out of it..Good post I liked it...  Julie :) |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
What a wonderful, happy picture you paint with your words Heather. Freedom is a very precious gift! *hugs* Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Yup indeedy, today is a much brighter day...  Tx all! ~Heather |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Heather this is awesome! Glad you are having a brighter time hon hugs K |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"there! freedom! it's hers!" heather... thank you for posting this... it's beautiful! i am that horse |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
XA* This is awesome writing...Your imagery was perfect and the piece flowed like the wind. Great work~ |
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