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Love's Regret
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Love's Regret |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Good for you. Guess you showed me. Unworthy, I upon my knees... Go then, hear no reprimanding, You've shown me all your understanding. There will be another yet... Remember? I am love's regret. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WOW!!! I so like this!!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
You write so amazingly.... GREAT regards O serene One, sudhir |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey Serenity Beautiful writing, great job! Take Care! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I REALLY liked this....and how I know what those words mean to me....great post!! Julie :) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I HATE when really good ones slip by me....and this is a good one. GET BACK UP THERE!!!!!!!!!! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
there will be another yet!! so many layers here... seems to be a theme cropping up today on the board.. I never regret reading your poetry |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
serenity, the gentle rhythm and subtle rhyme here allowed the sharp bitterness to take its deserved place at the forefront of this piece. Very well written. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very powerful writing. You have an amazing pen and you bring it to us a wonderful style. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Serenity this is superb, this struck home, and particually today. Take care. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ok..how did i miss this lastnite.. its not like we were SLEEPING (not us)  ...ya know what me thinks ...(yes you do).. me thinks its time to bring them to THEIR KNEES.... and let it be their regret... me thinks we got better things to do with our knees.. (poetically speaking OF COURSE) LOL  see how riled up you get me when your write these lil gems of defiance.. keep em coming .. *winkiewinkie* who loves ya baby .. me me me |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
serenity YOU ROCK!wish i said that nice one! ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a good apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Keep on - keeping on ! You're just really good at this. Big *Hugs* ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Wow girl!!! Get the heck up.....WE are going dancing!!!! You penned my side of the mirror with this one...ya, I know bad hair day...You penned with ache and strength! Love ya girl! Hugs~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done my friend. . . the bitterness and pain show well in this one. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You speak loud and clear here my friend. Much said with few words. Nice writing. BTW, you are always welcome to reply . . . we may not always agree, but that is okay too. Friends? LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks Sea! Hugs to Sudhir! I love your "WOWS"! LM--thanx much! JuliAnn...you are too sweet! O M'Deer! You have my gratitude eternally. Local Reb--You do know that I read everything you post? so thanks for the comp! claire--and I also adore your gentle style. Mark----thank you, angel...smiles and hugs. Marsha--oh. Bad Day? E me if ya need a lil something with more venom...hee hee. THELMA!!!--(We do tell on ourselves, don't we?) BIG FAT WET SMOOCHES TO YOU!!! doreen--thank you, thank you, I am so grateful, I did so badly need to be "rocked"! Mom!!--Oops...(I'll be good!) giggles to ya! Holly--am working on that story for you! will e ya the unedited version...thanks,luvie John--thank you for your most excellent "excellent"! Jen--you, most of all, have made my day start out right...I feel much better now.Hugs Thanks to all! I am off to work on my carpal tunnel syndrome! |
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