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Open Poetry #9

i WAS in love

One Who Understands
Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 251
Cedar Rapids, Iowa

0 posted 2000-09-07 02:18 AM

Wow, as I reminisce on all the memories of pain.  All the tears shed and heartbreaking nights spent crying over your picture.  I was in love with you.  I loved everything about you.  And I realize now, that you and I will never be.  So my love is locked up behind a distant door.  I want one more chance to see you.  I want to find out if my love was real.  I want to look in your eyes and know whether or not that feeling of fire still burns.  That fire that burned years ago.  I want one last chance.
Even thought the years have passed.  When I think of you, that very same pain exists.  The same heartache that pierced my soul years ago still hurts.  And I still cry when I see your picture.
Where are you?  What are you thinking?  Why am I still the same pain-stricken boy I way so long ago?  Please, be there for me one last time.  One last touch.  One last smile.  Just one last hug…before I go…

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-09-07 02:23 AM

One~ I love this.....touched my heart....

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

2 posted 2000-09-07 03:59 AM

Sigh... so sad... Really touching piece, Thanks for sharing and Take care!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-09-07 04:41 AM

Sorrowful piece you got there.

Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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