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Unspoken Words
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Unspoken Words |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA 
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Unspoken Words I have missed our long conversations, I have missed our dinners for two. I have missed our romantic vacations, but most of all - I have missed you. Without you the nights are so dark and lonely, Each one gets longer and longer til morn. I can't help loving and missing you, but above all - please speak to me! Speak to me of skies so blue, Speak to me of our love when it was new. Speak to me of flowers and streams, Speak to me of wonderful dreams. Above all - please speak to me! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I like this one..  very nice |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good evening 'didi', I read your poem and felt what you were saying. Sad at times, but very true in life. I'm glad that I stopped by. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Well smack me in the face, I can relate sooo...much. nicely put. What I write and others read is your own experiance and perceptions. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A much desired longing...beautiful writing...James |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Victoria: Thank you for coming by and your nice words of praise. Mr. Charles: Coming from a super poet that you are, I thank you for your nice words and for stopping by. Maria: Thank you for coming by - I think we all can relate to "Unspoken Words". It really hurts. James: Thank you for detecting the real meaning of the poem - desired longing. didi |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
(sigh) Yeah... I miss those too. Nice poem. --Dave "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh... yeah, I know what you mean. Beautiful |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
i have never reallyliked the silent treatment much either....I must be able to talk to someone.....liked this post alot...great job!! Julie :) |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
To: WhiteNite, LM and Julie Ann Thanks for stopping by with your gracious comments. Sometimes this type of poem brings back memories. Thanks again didi |
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