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JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-09-06 02:23 PM


Just thought it was a neat way to invite someone to this site...for friends who live far.....

I want to share with you
a place that's won my heart
a place to go when I'm alone
and need to record my thoughts

whether my thoughts be
of the past or the present
a lover or a friend
the friends I have found here
will listen to the end

they call it a
"home without a wall
our haven without ends"
and they have created a
"circle we all call
our family of friends"

so please stop by
and take a peek
I'd love to hear your dreams
share with us your fantasies
as hopeless as they seem
find encouragement
understanding and trust
log off you can't
though you know you must!!!

(it is addicting!!)< !signature-->

Julie    






[This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 09-06-2000).]

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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-06 05:53 PM


Addicting it is for sure
As we play within these walls
Reaching out to hearts to endure
All the bruises from their falls

A place to come and rest in peace
As we read and reply all night long
Once we come to the point in which to cease
We find one more poem that reads like a song

Tear me away and shut the puter down
I can't stay away I am too weak
Lace me up in tranquilities gown
Find me the help that I desperatley seek.


****yes it is sort of addicting now ain't it.  Nice read here lil lady!    

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-06-2000).]

Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-09-06 09:47 PM


..and yes it is! Very good job waving the Passions banner and motto. Your poem emits such truths.  Great writing & enjoyed. Marcy
JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
3 posted 2000-09-06 10:02 PM


Thank You Mark...and yours was great too....I do appreciate your replys...have I told you how much they mean to me?? Well if not it's A LOT!!! Thanks again so much!!  

Marcy~~Thank you...i was just trying to think of a creative way to tell some of my friends far away aboutthis site....and this turned out to be perfect!! Thanks a bunch!!  

Julie :)



Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-09-07 02:45 AM


Excellent writing, JulieAnn...
so very well expressed...

regards,
sudhir

JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
5 posted 2000-09-07 04:09 AM


Thank you Sudhir~~~It just came to me....and I couldn't resist!!!  

Julie :)



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