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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-09-06 10:21 AM



The Morning Rose


A rush of cool air speaks to the morning rose
share your glory of velvet red
tipped with silver drops of morning dew
a golden butterfly flutters nearby
in glowing anticipation he waits

Mr. Snail creeps in to take a seat
Oh, enchanting rose, do give us a show!
overflow with blooms, in soft hues of red
surround us with silver droplets of morning dew
dance with the golden sunrise
as birds sing a lovely melody

As morning gives way to a sunny day
take a bow with the petals you shed
shower us with a carpet of red
soft enchanting morning rose

Till we meet again in June
so long my friends ...


BloomingRose



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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-09-06 10:22 AM


Oh, such wonderful poetry....

Thank you for a great read...

regards,
sudhir

BloomingRose
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2 posted 2000-09-06 02:47 PM


Thanks Sudhir
I looked at my one rose bush this morning, and I have several red roses in full bloom. I think this is there last show before fall.

Deb  

Romy
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3 posted 2000-09-06 04:52 PM


This is such a beautiful poem, I felt as if I were watching outside my own window!
Alle'cram
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4 posted 2000-09-07 12:10 PM


..this is so lovely, so lyrical and soothing. Topnotch.   Love, Marcy
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5 posted 2000-09-07 12:35 PM


BloomingRose~
Hope these roses keep you company
long after the winter claims the
blossoms of your rose bush.
Your poem is lovely. ~*Marge*~




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BloomingRose
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6 posted 2000-09-07 09:07 AM


Debbie, Alle'cram and Marge
Thank you all for your kind words...

Marge,
Thank you for the roses~that made my day!
I dearly love flowers, but especially roses.


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