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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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isn't entirely about me...(i don't even like beer)...and it IS just about a few motnhs late at that....but was feeling a little restless i guess..  i've been sitting here on my couch a little restless and out of sorts mind in the clouds and i ask God to please tell me why... and all my dreams now live through you and in the darkness i swallow another bitter pill wash it down with my last beer 'cause the pains too much to bear once the hurt set in i knew i got what i deserved so don't tell me what i could have had the cards were dealt i played my hand came up with just a pair that time so i folded cut my losses walked away somehow i know i will never forget that day and if you need convincing i left the photographs behind the little one is six the big one almost nine the boys are a constant reminder of the life i left behind... so please don't bother telling me that it could be easy and that i had no reason 'cause my heart was lonely baby and though you were there next to me my soul was screaming to be free.... Julie :) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Tremendous writing, JulieAnn... Excellent work... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JulieAnn~ I think this is a good piece. Reflectively honest and sadly rendered. 'so don't tell me what i could have had the cards were dealt i played my hand came up with just a pair that time so i folded cut my losses walked away' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So glad to know that this is not going on now with you. Very sad and painful but the read was wonderfully done. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you Sud....I do appreciate your replys you are too kind.. Marge...thank you so much for stopping into read this...i am glad you liked it... \Mark....around every turn poetry is going through my head....I need to carry a tape recorder,,,U know those little ones like the reporters use,,,? anyway....yes I have been holding back on this one for some time.....it is a tribute to my past..I sort of needed to let go I guess.....Thank you for reading...I do appreciate your replys greatly....  < !signature-->Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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