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As The Poet Yearns |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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As The Poet Yearns ~*Marge Tindal*~ Camera fades in She sits at the desk Pen illuminated in hand by dimly lit screen Where is the magic that makes it work He enters the room and the magnetism stirs He sits at the desk opposite hers The ink splashes between them in candled shadows of the indigo skies Between them now the words burn slowly Flickering with exhaling of sighs Pen me when the evening shadows have danced beyond the hill Write me while the night shivers with song of whippoorwill Cover me in passionate phrases Lay your body next to mine I'll be the dream poet brought to life Stretching this night beyond all rhyme When tangerine peeks over the horizon love has taken hold of this sunrising Pens lay poised as if in flight Passionate poet phrases penned parchment in the night |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The ink splashes between them in candled shadows of the indigo skies Between them now the words burn slowly Flickering with exhaling of sighs Pen me when the evening shadows have danced beyond the hill Write me while the night shivers with song of whippoorwill Cover me in passionate phrases Lay your body next to mine I'll be the dream poet brought to life Stretching this night beyond all rhyme =================== YOWZA...... margie-girl this is so sensual and poetic... simply enchanting... "Stretching this night beyond all rhyme" MY OH MY do I LOVE that line ... mmm mmm mmm.. love your poets pen when its passionate  later-spicy-gator love ya me |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"Pen me when the evening shadows have danced beyond the hill Write me while the night shivers with song of whippoorwill" Marge while I loved the entire poem - this verse sang to me beyond measure (amazed you could keep pen in hand when he entered the room ~G~) |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
What else can I say but beautiful. Dee |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hello dear Margie-girl  It's been awhile since I visited and oh how I've missed this place and you. This is the first poem I've read so far and oh what loving, sensual emotions shown. Way to go Margie!! See Ya Love Tracie xx Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
When tangerine peeks over the horizon love has taken hold of this sunrising Pens lay poised as if in flight Passionate poet phrases penned parchment in the night ------ ...You pen breathtaking marvels, my friend... ...here is another example... regards sudhir |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this one *sizzles* in such a soft romantic sensual way....oh marge! cant get better than this (but im sure you will prove me wrong!)  ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Inker~ I would say, "Thank you, JanetMarie~, but everyone knows she is currently incarcerated !" Check the cake ... there's a pen inside.  Wilfred~ Sometimes you just gotta have a little control - I have very little ! LOL ! Dee~ Thank you for the 'beautiful'. Tracie~ My friend, I'm always pleased to know you've read me. Thank you. Sudhir~ I do so cherish your compliment. PoutPrincess~ Awww ! Thank you and I hope so ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oh how this cowboy loves the passionate side of Marge. Wonderful write my friend. Your pen added to the touch of your heart makes me want ride toward YOUR tangerine in the morning sky. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Marge; I am in awe at the exquisite beauty of this romantic and sensual poem! I want to quote a line, but can't choose, because eveyone is magnificent. Please consider putting this beauty up for the next book? Love, Ellie P.S.I loved the little flying fairy and thank you so much for all your lovely replies Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Once again, a very beautiful poem! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Wow...if I could pick a favoite of yours, and I can't, this would be it...I think you have let loose your muse with this one...beautiful and sensually captivating! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge, What a beautifully written and softly sensual poem rp25 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marvellous Marge mirrors mystical magic mesmerized me. What a glorious poem, perfectly penned. Beautiful Marge as usual.  |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
Marge......You took my breath away with this one.......absolutely lovely!!!!!! PS: I haven't been here in so long I feel like a lost soul whose come home.......what a reading to come home to!!!! Many blessings and much love always, Eno Words are my medicine. Read and live and love and heal! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Marge - terrific poem of compositions and passions - wonderful story line What's this??? Did I really read a post from Janet Marie??? Hey there, ya lil stranger! Its nice to read your thoughts again. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge Nicely written. Much enjoyed. Deb |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Simply grand... Now all we have to do is set this to music... bring on the cameras... Such fun, Marge..  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I loved this poem..simply gorgeous |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark~ Mark~ Mark~ You're such a sweet romantic ! Thanks always for being YOU ! Ellie~ I so appreciate your kind thoughts. I enjoy popping into The Corner Pub and catching your sweet poetry. Debbie~ Thank you so very much. Martie~ Yep ! That's my sis, alright ! I LOVE your decisiveness ! I love you. RosePetals~ Thanks for the reply, gal. Enjoying your posts too. Marsha~ Love the alliterated reply. Enotneicna~ Oh, it's so nice to see you. Thank you for the visit and I shall look to see if you left me a gem of your own. LongJohn~ Thanks, fella. BloomingRose~ Thank you, Hon. I enjoy reading your posts also. Nan~ Lights, camera ... lots of action ! Thanks for the read. Victoria~ Thank you so very, very much for taking a moment to enjoy this. I appreciate your reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Dynamite poem, Marge! Wow! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you for your reply. Tee-Hee ! Check your e-mail for a chuckle. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ You blow me away!!! This is beautiful and so creative....I just love how you do that! You inspire me. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Marge~~~You have such a gift...and you use it well....such beautiful poetry from you as always..... Julie :) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
OH MYThis is wonderful Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Wasn't that yummy? Marge, you just keep amazing me. I can't comprehend how it is that you can write in such volume and yet with such quality. They just seem to keep getting better. Gorgeous, sensual, soft and warm... I loved it! Trev. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Passionate poet phrases penned parchment in the night" What a beautiful scene you've painted Marge ... it left me with such visual images. Your words are simply devine in this verse. I believe this is now one of my favorites of yours! Beautifully penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Much delight at your reply. To inspire is this poet's joy. JulieAnn~ Oh, I thank you for opening my 'gifts'. Kethry~ Your reply is 'music to my ears'. Trew~ An ultimate compliment you've paid me. I will alway strive to earn it. Kit~ Glad you enjoyed the dance of pens. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now Marge, whereforever did you come up with the word "tangerine"!? Passionate, as always... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Glad you enjoyed the juicy color. I can guarantee you that when the sun rises over the lake it matches the color of the tangerines on some of my citrus trees. Big smiles here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your talents always amaze me. You come out with the most creative approaches and my dear, you write good too. love ya' Liz |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Marge* Your words come to life everytime I read them...I see it all so clearly and it's beautiful...a dance of poetry. **hugs** |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ WOW!!! This is awesome!!! Just love the scene you have described my friend. So full of detail I can see it right before my eyes. Excellent writing!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
marge- this is so beautiful and so romantic...i love it!! you never cease to amaze me with your mastery of words. i just love reading your poetry. love you, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Your pen struck deep with this one lady Marge...such a wondrous picture you paint for me...thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LizzieLuv~ Hugs from your way are just the nicest gift. ButterfliesDC~ Thank you, sweet gal. LoneWolf~ Awww ! I love your replies. Vicky~ Pleased to send a little romance your way. Paula~ I certainly appreciate the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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