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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-09-05 10:33 PM



Fate Complete (A Luc Bat)

Once again we shall meet
Allowing me your sweet of kiss.
Tender moments as this
Lingering thoughts, I miss so much.
You offered rainbows touch.
I grasped to hold, to clutch the bright
Beauty-laced colored sight.
Lost the ribbons, this night, as dark
Springs stars to life, to spark.
Another tune to mark the time
'Til break of day, when I'm
Viewing morn, sun's climb, and wait
To see you enter gate
Reaching for me, your fate complete.

Maureen
*2k


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Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 2000-09-05 10:39 PM


The whole weave was beautiful M but the last line wrapped this up with an exquisite bow~
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