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Lonely New Life |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA 
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who am i but a number or a face who should i let myself be i let people look me by as if to avoid seeing the real me but the truth be know there is no me there is no person behind my smile behind the frown i present at times people request the feelings i hold but how can i show what i don’t know i am but only a face or a name less to some more to others how can anyone be sure of who they are in a world where you are questioned so how should i present myself today should i be the one everyone wants or should i do just as i please are we put here on this earth to do what others desire or shall we do only to please ourselves because to others i am nothing more than a mere face, a friendly gesture dismissed before a second thought because where i sit here on this earth i am nothing more than a smile. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I'm in awe of this...you have penned my thoughts today, sensational writing and as long as you hold onto that smile....the answers to the rest will come~ |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Thanks for your comment I just started college and am living in a dorm. It's been a hard adjustment. It's nice to know I'm not alone! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Angelwings, if you are "dismissed before a second thought" they are missing someone who seems to me to be very insightful. Their loss, our gain. Dee |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Thank you Dee~ It means so much to hear you say that Dee, thank you, you may never know how much you help a perfect stranger. Chelsea |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Yet for today you seem a number or just a face but in the days ahead when you adjust you'll begin to see there's really something quite special in you. Very good poem |
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UNC STAR Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 67Hinesville,Ga,USA |
That was poem was very touching.I really enjoyed it. |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Thank you for your support! I appreciate the comments and I hope that everyone agrees with you and we aren't so different in the end. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you can be whoever you want to be...don't look at what oher people are doing or saying or wanting you to be...people know a fake smile a mile away...you gotta be real, no matter what you choose to be that day, be yourself. Happiness is inside of you, not outside. Outside changes too much for you to find happiness there. And if you created a new lonely life for yourself, you can create anything you want! [This message has been edited by passing shadows (edited 09-09-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AngelWings~ Ahhhhh ! But you are a poet ... and with that knowledge and a smile ...  You've got it all ! Now 'YOU may never know how much you help a perfect stranger.' Share that smile ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Thank you for your comments. And good luck in future writings. |
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