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ggrn3
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

0 posted 2000-09-05 09:23 PM




You find yourself in a place
Where your not suppose to be...
Mist & fog mix in your mind
As it rolls up off a turbulent sea...

You see lizards, frogs, and snakes
Slivering through the grass...
A burning feeling fills your stomach
And you hope the eerie feeling will pass...

You hear the death beat of your heart
Banging deep within your ear...
The fear of Death beckoning
Creates a mystified tear...

You scream and shout
Trying to vocalize your fear it seems...
Then you realize there's no one around
No one to hear your screams...

The paralysis that has set in
Seems to flow in your veins...
And every pulse of your heart
Drives you a little crazier; insane...

You feel yourself slippin deeper into darkness
Fightin' with demons in the night...
Your clawing a the skirt of reality
Fightin' to see the light...

You scream "somebody help me"
With all you can muster from your last breath...
Hoping someone will awaken you
From your dreary restlessness...

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Garfield



[This message has been edited by ggrn3 (edited 09-05-2000).]

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Steve B
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 140
Southern PA
1 posted 2000-09-05 10:32 PM


ggm3 ~ shivers, hope I can sleep tonight after reading all these great scarey poems..
Thanks for adding  to the fun   SB


“The union of the mathematician with the poet,
fervor with measure, passion with correctness,
this surely is the ideal”

ggrn3
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
2 posted 2000-09-06 06:50 PM


Steve B

  I sure you slept just fine.  I sure you have peace in mind.  I don't think your scared of anything.  Not even the best of Stephen King.
  
  Have a good night.

Garfield

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-09-06 07:25 PM


Man could I relate to this. Been in that nightmare way too many times. Great job ggrn.
Juls

ggrn3
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since 2000-08-17
Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.
4 posted 2000-09-07 07:05 PM


Juliet

  Thanks for your comments.  Hopefully you won't have any more nightmares any time soon.

Garfield

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