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Close your Eyes |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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(Heavily rewritten vers. Of 4/98 poem) Close your lovely eyes keeper of my heart Let your imagination start to rove Let me guide you on a sweet journey Let me tell you all aspects of my love Close your eyes and hear the soft words Tread different pathways to your heart Without sound just deep sense of voice Hear the deep emotion of my part Close your eyes and feel my presence All of my warmth you will agree The passion forge within my flesh Conveys all that our love shall be Close your eyes, just let my breath flow Let it's flowing on skin soft caress you The silent message that I'm sending I'll tell you gently as I always do Close your eyes and feel my closeness Rest your head sweetly upon my chest Hear the pounding there within me Bass drum, beating to a high crest By your touch it is made throbbing And so strongly it does resound Rumbles all through the heavens With you it will never be bound Open your eyes now, and see me Gaze deeply now into my eye See all the love that resides there Forever though all seasons fly Use your eyes, watch me placing kisses, My lips lightly touching your skin Kiss here, a kiss there, a kiss, and stare It's just a way for love to begin Feel the security of my arms As we embrace and we snuggle Bands of armor, soft as silken thread Keeping you secure with no struggle Close your eyes again now my love Feel the freedom, know my love will last Find the confidence in knowing My strong passion now holds you fast With true love, abiding and secure love. Love you've inspired, love for only you Feel strength, and passion for you love Sweet and fresh as early morning dew ~Why not seize the pleasure at once? How often is happiness destroyed by preparation, foolish preparation? ~ Jane Austen ~ wilfredyeats@hotmail.com |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Ohh...it's so lovely... I enjoyed it a lot! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Bill, this was a riveting, sensory journey in word. Lovely thoughts shared. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely Wilfred! Sensual and softly spoken .. words to be whispered late into the evening ... beautiful sentiments!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ This is very lovely. Such reassurances of love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Bill...once again you have managed to capture this heart with your words...and so tenderly...I really love this one |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
LM - Thank you Claire- your extraordinary words - fill me with a greater desire to work harder - thank you so much Kit - Yes - Whispered they should be and they will be - given the opportunity - Thank you Marge- Speaking for myself - I need lots of reassurance - Therefore - I assume everyone should appreciate and maybe even need it as well - Thank you Paula- Tender is as tender does - is it not as is should be also? Thank you |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Wilfred, another gem from a master. I could almost hear the soft whispers. Dee |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Dee- Thank you - you are much too kind |
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