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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-09-05 11:30 AM


Patience, come to thee
Let thy poetic wit sit
That what writ, be right



Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-09-05 11:38 AM



~Karilea~

Wonderful words flow
From the pen you wield so well
This is Poetry!

regards
sudhir

Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-09-05 02:09 PM


Thank you Sudhir...it's fun!
Sunnyone
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3 posted 2000-09-05 02:11 PM


  
Let their be Sunshine..
Dancing in the sky above..
Words of truth and love..


     I always enjoy your every word!!      !!  
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Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
    'the Present'!






[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-05-2000).]

Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-09-05 04:39 PM


Sunny1, I have to laugh...I wrote this as a remindful joke to me to let my stuff sit so I can go back and find errors in my spelling/grammer BEFORE I post...LOL at you, as you still have time to edit, if indeed "their" should be "there". [Or you could have meant "theirs" and I could get hugs from everyone!]

Hugs, my friend!!!!

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2000-09-05 06:05 PM


Powerful words penned
From a celestial light
Who shines so brightly

Great work Sunshine!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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