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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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A heart, pumps out-- as mine, within, taking all, that has been, pewter-- shining-- new again... an answer, in a canyon cold... simple metal turned to gold... within my grasp I hold the stone-- philosophy of faith untold-- to listen, watch-- myself, unfold... I delight in growing old... if this is what it is... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 09-05-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi serenity... You know, I loved the entire poem, but I have to tell you that the very last two lines really touched me!! What a nice way to end this lovely poem......... I enjoyed my read!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Awesome..... regards O serene One, Sudhir |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
A lovely peice, serenity. I think I'll have to go back and read it again. Dee |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I delight in growing old... if this is what it is... =================== ya just need to be kissed for this one *winkie winkie* *kiss kiss* me loves ya like this ... me loves ya either way ... but me thinks your on your way ... me thinks your gonna be a hard act to follow  me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sunny1--I'm hoping that I have saved the best for last...smiles to you and thanks... Sudhir--good to see ya my friend, methinks you have been busy too...I shall have to catch up on your work, thank you for reading me lovely! and Dee--I KNOW you just got back!!! Thanks for popping in on me first thing....love ya. and JM--serenity is beaming as she types...I know I'm not supposed to...but I just love it when I see you're name there...helllo gorgeous! grin...THANK YOU BABY....I will catch up on me "e"'s as soon as I can move again...hee hee...the other twin had to "move " yesterday, and methinks me moved more than her...LOL, but OUCH.... e ya later. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Growth ... moderately sculpting yourself for the future. Tee-Hee .... Beats the heck out of 'growing old'. You tickle me !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Me thinks I should be asking you questions... wonderful poem... enjoyed muchly. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
We shall never grow old S'en....it just wouldn't be right Beautiful work my friend...nice to see you beam!! ((hugs)) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Serenity a wonderful spell you have cast with your poetry, excellent piece. "Think I'm - I'm lost among the undergrowth So much so I woke up I love you all the same" Manic street preachers You stole the sun from my heart. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
heavy but simple ... just like i like 'em ... great work, Serenity ... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Serenity,...your wording, your flow,...*sigh*,...I truly admire the way that you write. This is TOP! Take care you. *Peace. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
which is perfection? the twig? the bud? the blooming rose? falling petals? petals in decay enriching the soil for next year's bloom? each is fulfilling it's design... each is perfect... to unfold, or grow old... naturally delightfull as is Alchemy.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marge---Thanks so much, your love and thoughtfulness has kept me out of much trouble this week!!! I thank you a million times. Hugs. Mike--Huh? Okay...hee hee, you're a brave one...But thank you! Holly--But I'm likin' growing older...and it sure as hell beats the alternative! Hugs, you. brian--me brilliant Irish lad, you...m'gosh your comments go right to my head...with Gratitude from me. Mark--I thank you also, as you know, I am a fan of yours as well... Spitfire--Hugs and thanks, and I'm fine...I think...ain't I? Local Reb--somehow I knew you'd know about this--*winks* and thanks!!! |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
You got me at the end.. it didn't turn out quite like expected which made it even better!!!  Loved it!!! Julie :) |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Magical musing moments, poetically melded. Lovely, Serenity. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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