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Kevin
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0 posted 2000-09-05 12:53 PM


The words repeated in my head
I had been practicing for days
And yet these words could not be said
Lost among my hearts delays.
The silence fell on both our ears
Why did you still seem so content?
Struggling just to face my fears
It seemed like hours came and went.
When somehow in your gazing eyes
Amiss my most unveiling hour
I felt an inner passion rise
And granted on myself the power
To tell you everything I felt
You smiled at me and brought me near
I kissed your lips and felt mine melt,
As you whispered in my ear.
Your softly spoken loving words
Were the sweetest sounding ever said,
And ever since the day I heard,
Your words repeated in my head.

I love you.

© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Dee
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1 posted 2000-09-05 01:16 AM


Kevin, a very beautiful poem. Whom ever it is written for is a very lucky lady.
Dee


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-09-05 01:19 AM


Kevin~
This is so softly loving.
Where hope buds ... there blossoms a flower.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-09-05 04:16 AM


Lots of Love and caring and sincerity in this poem...I loved reading this...James
Marina
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4 posted 2000-09-05 12:05 PM


A very lucky lady indeed!  A poet and a warm heart......what lady could ask for more!!  

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



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