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We Could Make Music Tonight
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We Could Make Music Tonight |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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We Could Make Music Tonight ~*Marge Tindal*~ Play me with emotion Cause I've got a notion We could make music tonight Hold me and strum me Pull the chords from me Make me your crescendo tonight Caress lightly the strings Make harmony ring Oh, sing me softly tonight In a moment of bliss One soft fingered kiss Play me so gently this night One classic tune Not a minute too soon We will make music tonight ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Marge! Enjoy the music! Denise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- What a beautiful melody. I love this. Reading this made me smile.  love ya -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
'tis beautiful music you make Marge... btw.. this witch I know would like to know if he can play a tune with you and take you out for some fruit cake and brussel sprouts afterwards... *smile* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thanks, gal !  Vicky~ Glad to see you in Open Playground. Thanks bunches. Mike~ Best offer I've had tonight ! !  Thanks, you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I like the sounds of this music playing... Need I say more... Great poem LadyMarge DaNi "There are 26 letters in the alphabet and from those letters anyone can have the world at their fingertips..." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge......you wanna join my band?? You sound just like a musician.....are you?? I loved this one, it sang to my soul!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah, so lovely... great work, my friend, Marge... Regards, Sudhir |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This cowboy loves your tune....and your song ain't bad either.  beautiful my sweet friend.....now who is playin what tune and where do I fit in? |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh wow!!! I totally fell for this one... Magnificent... "We could make music tonight..." So romantic... oooohhhhh... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, Evocative,of blue raphsodies. What else can I say? Kethry< !signature--> "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 09-05-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge play it again, this is a beautiful melody. What a song, what music, what a voice! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, sometimes you make me laugh. Who, but you would have thought of this. This is going to pull somebody's strings! Love it! Liz |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Marge, I think you've been hiding a passionate side of you!! Let it out woman!!! Kathleen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ I always appreciate your sweet comments. Sunny1~ Shucks, they don't pay me for it, but I'm forever singing. Thanks for the comp !  Sudhir~ Thanks my morning sunshine ! Cowboy~ You can just jump in anywhere !Or write a verse ! LM~ I like your reply. Thanks. Kethry~ Just what you said is purrrfect ! Marsha~ I thank you on all counts ! Appreciate your thoughts. Lizzie~ Just singing my little heart out ! Love ya'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ Lordy, woman ... I've been spreading passion all over the place ! LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, what a lovely song you sing |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
You did it again Marge! Great writing. Deb |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
They say that there is a song for every moment imagined just as there is a poem...your poem has melded the two perfectly...beautiful~ |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
They do say that there is many an good tune to be played on an old fiddle....I am hoping they are right!!!!!! A very good read |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it a lot!!!!!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh lady you have me dancing |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Sounds like it will be a celestial duet - I envy you the reality of your love |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I enjoyed the melody these words brought to me Marge. The third line in each verse brought this beautifully together ... it sang all the way to the end. Lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Just beautiful my friend. Reminds me of the symphony. You have captured it well. I hope you hear the tune always in your heart. Nice writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey Marge...can I go with you and that witchey for brussel sprouts...please! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
grab me, foxtrot me Show me how you've got me Let's make music tonight! Shake me, bossa nova me Pour your passion ovah me Let's make music tonight! Give me loops and give me twirls Make me forget the other girls Spin me 'round and swing me low Love me, girl, and let me know. Twirl me, twist me Show me how you missed me Let's make music tonight!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ Thank you, Hon. BloomingRose~ Glad you let me know you enjoyed it. ButterfliesDC~ What a sweet thing to say. EnglishRose~ Heck, I don't even mind being second-fiddle, as long as somebody plays me ! VanDana~ Thanks, my friend. Paula~ ALRIGHT ! Wilfred~ Dancing with the stars ! Kit~ I especially pleased to share with you. LoneWolf~ Thank you, my melodic friend. Martie~ Welllllllll ! Seeing as how you begged ... I guess so ! Balladeer~ My, my ... you do sweep a gal off her feet ! Willingly ! Tee-Hee ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what an instant lift of spirit! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dixie~ YES ! That's what they pay me for ! LOL LOL LOL Love ya, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Everyone hears that sweet music of yours Margie Way to go!! Love Tracie Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I can't say anything that hasn't been said already sooo DITTO I think is all that is left...liked it alot.. Julie :) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Luv, you make this heart sing just seeing you here again. I'm really glad you are better and able to come out and play. JulieAnn~ Thanks, you do the 'ditto' well ! I appreciate the reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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