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Where Memories Flow Like Water

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Wilfred Yeats
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25 posted 09-10-2000 02:37 AM       View Profile for Wilfred Yeats   Email Wilfred Yeats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wilfred Yeats's Home Page   View IP for Wilfred Yeats

A good lesson for us all - I'll have to rethink - some of the times I've been singing "I did it my way" - beautifully done Kit-- truly - I'll save this one
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26 posted 09-10-2000 02:59 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear Kit
I would have missed this wonderful piece if it hadn't been for Marge (thanks Marge)
This is surely the most beautiful and precious piece of poetry I have read in a long time, you have done well Kit this is a very lovable piece  
Love Tracie xx


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27 posted 09-10-2000 03:00 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

hi KIT,

There's really nothing more to say
that some1 above has not said about this breath-taking poem you've shared.

Thankyou for this embracing read...
Coco


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CocoBaci
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28 posted 09-10-2000 03:06 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

ps... I'm keeping this one  

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Elizabeth Santos
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29 posted 09-10-2000 07:51 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Kit
This is a poem to treasure, indeed. I think I read into your heart, and I know what this poem is saying. It is very touching and beautiful, and exquisitely written
Liz
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30 posted 09-10-2000 02:50 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Wow, Kit I am very happy that you gave me the link to read this poem. It is so amazing. I loved how you portray that no matter when the time is, you just have to always let things heal WITH time, rather than use time as this portal leap into where happiness reigned and sadness was covered up. I loved the poem! Simply just loved it.


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I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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31 posted 09-10-2000 05:23 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Kit,

You have pened such beauty, I am in total awe and chills run up and down my body as I can actually feel the water and see it cascade over the fall. very much loved it.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Martie
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32 posted 09-10-2000 06:03 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Kit--I wish I had new words to say what all have said above...this is an outstanding poem, both in content and form...and sure got me thinking about my mom beyond the waterfall...thank you for that!
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33 posted 09-11-2000 08:38 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

A friend of ours pointed me to this, and I am very, very glad she did...well done, Kit...a story within a story...and told well.
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34 posted 02-17-2001 11:22 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kit~
Even more beautiful on this remembering night -
*Hug*
~*Marge*~


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35 posted 01-23-2005 08:45 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

You 'know' sometimes when I feel slighted in having no real family growing up, I like to spend a night in the archives sharing in the families of others.  This was one of those nights I missed that and you too.  
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36 posted 01-04-2009 08:21 PM       View Profile for romancewriter   Email romancewriter   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for romancewriter

A bit of magic in this one.  Good job.

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37 posted 03-10-2013 01:38 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Kit, how happy I am to have stopped to read this poem. It's amazing.  Simply wonderful.

Alison
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