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T.Rose
Junior Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 20

0 posted 2000-08-21 02:15 AM

Neptune's Touch
By Theresa Rose

He touches my heart.
He has made me free.
He's taken me by my hand,
He makes me see me.

I see now all that I am,
And all that I could be.
He's taken me from my watery desert
To the shores of a new wide open sea.

Oh how I have yearned,
for so long,
To spread my wings in flight,
But for this pierced dove
of a long drowned love,
The world,
It was too deep in night.

He raises the hands that have
enveloped me.
Hands that have guided me safely to
this shore.
And now,
He opens his hands, so cautiously
Allowing me a chance to soar.

I lift up my wings,
I feel the breeze
And now,
I begin to rise.

He has shown to me
Who I can be
And now,
I no longer see the lies.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-08-25 12:04 PM

the beauty is in the eye of the beholder both outer and inner and this holds true for me and you. beautiful poem

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

2 posted 2000-08-25 05:31 PM

Very pretty poem! I love the reference to Neptune...I'm a big star and planet freak!

You know, there's nothing in this that makes it too "HOT" for adult, you really should consider posting it in Open so that more readers can enjoy it there! It has some really beautiful thoughts in here I think others would enjoy too! Just a thought! Thanks for sharing...

sonjes
Senior Member

since 2000-02-18

Posts 564
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-08-26 07:35 AM

I agree with Femme...this poem is too beautiful to have it cooped up in ADult...but we definitely appreciate it...its always a nice change....insightful and beautiful trose

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2000-09-04 10:17 PM

Moved from Adult and bumped for a good read!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-09-04 10:21 PM

T.Rose~
This is lovely.
I'm glad we got a chance to read it.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2000-09-05 04:27 AM

I am so glad that this was moved to the open forums. I would have hated to miss it. This is so beautiful in it's content and it's format as well. The entire piece just flows with love and takes the reader on such a most wonderous journey.

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