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MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
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0 posted 2000-09-04 08:26 PM


A Little Bit of Humour A Bit Too Much Tongue

Well as you know, a splits occurring
My husbands done with me...
I am trying to see some humour in it
And this weekend, it came to be..
Between the two of them, punishing me
With a new hurt coming each day
As he motels  with her
and she coerces him, too
into not being nice in his say
My husband, had bit his tongue real hard
Is troubled now trying to speak...
It's swollen and sore and I had to go get
some salve, as I took a peek
Don't want him in pain, yet I must admit
I think it's quite funny for now
kissing her, he won't be doing just yet
at least not to "french" anyhow..
it's so bad I am wondering if  maybe  it will
be turning a bit gangrene...
I must confess he was good with his tongue
Must be killing him, not heard, only seen
I ask him a question on purpose each time
furious the look I get then
he can't respond without pain in his tongue
so I keep asking them over again
Oh My, I will forever rejoice in this moment
in knowing he's suffering, too
Well I hope that you smile, just a wee little bit
As I share this, my weekend with you.

Sighingggggggggg and smilinggggggg
Maureen




[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-04-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
Steve B
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 140
Southern PA
1 posted 2000-09-04 11:06 PM


Maureen ~ it is good to see you smile again
          finding humor in a bad situation is
          a good way to begin to heal,, well
          done .. Steve B


“The union of the mathematician with the poet,
fervor with measure, passion with correctness,
this surely is the ideal”

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
2 posted 2000-09-04 11:14 PM


[[hugs]] I'm sorry friend - I've not been around much - Thanks for the update - and 'yes' it is funny - I just wish there were an easier solution
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