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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-09-04 05:59 PM



It's Gonna Be Okay
~*Marge Tindal*~

When nighttime comes
and you lay gently cross my shoulder
a warming wrap to keep the winds away
I feel the presence of your friendship
holding me in a tender embrace
I know it's gonna be okay

In times of trouble
I've only to step upon the bridge
guided by the gentleness of your hand
If and when all else should fail to hold me
or I should reach the bottom not knowing
which way to turn I'll have your love
I know it's gonna be okay

Friendships found through life
laying gently in this heart of mine
I'm gonna give it back in fullest measure
one good deed at a time - at a time
just one good deed at a time
You know it's gonna be okay






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2000-09-04 06:03 PM


So very beautiful....tis the real Marge all the way in this one.  LOVE IT AND LOVE YOU MY FRIEND.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2000-09-04 06:13 PM


Sometimes we need to be reminded and encouraged that life is not all dark and stormy.
And it is expecially bright if we have someone special in our arms...
Went to the movies yesterday with Mena to watch "The Art of War" and life was looking pretty bright...James

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3 posted 2000-09-04 06:40 PM


Marge, this melodic piece is such a lovely testimony to the true nature and nurturing of friendship.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau



Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-09-04 08:22 PM


MarkB~
You know me so well ... straight from my heart for a friend.
Thanks, love.

James~
Friendship given comes back when one needs it most.
Thank you for the reply.

Claire~
You always read me well, my friend.
Thanks for the sincerity of your reply.
~*Marge*~


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5 posted 2000-09-04 08:30 PM


absolutely beautiful, Marge
~~soft smiles
Maureen

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Marge~ this is beautiful!!! I love the feel of this! WONDERFUL!!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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7 posted 2000-09-04 08:43 PM


What a way to describe friendship! This read almost like a song...good work Marge!

Elizabeth

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8 posted 2000-09-04 09:32 PM


Maureen~
Thank you, my friend.
You've been on my mind.
Hugs and prayers~

SEA~
I just love your enthusiasm !
Thank ya', gal !

Elizabeth~
Thank you, hon.
I would guess that friendship is the sweetest song ever sung.
~*Marge*~


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9 posted 2000-09-04 09:45 PM


Big Smiles and warm hugs Marge...I thank you for this...
shows the generosity of your spirit...much lovely love to ya.

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10 posted 2000-09-04 09:54 PM


Marge, you got it rite lady...

"one deed at a time" (my fav line)

Bless you for this sweet piece of poetry!

  DaNi  
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There's 26 letters in the alphabet and from those letters anyone can have the world at their fingertips...

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 09-04-2000).]

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11 posted 2000-09-04 09:56 PM


LittleSerenity~
A special hug just for you ! {{{Hug}}}
I'm sending it Special Angel Express !
Love ya' ... bunches.
~*Marge*~


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12 posted 2000-09-04 09:58 PM


Dani~
Thanks for popping in, hon.
I think that I've been blessed with some
of the greatest friendships in this world.
I can only hope to return what has been given
to me one good deed at a time.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2000-09-04 10:23 PM


How could I not respond to such a beautiful poem? Just when I needed it - you posted it -
Thank you thank you thank you

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14 posted 2000-09-04 10:34 PM


Wilfred~
That's the joy of writing ...
knowing that you touched a friend just when
the touching was needed.
Hugs, my friend.
Thank you for letting me know.

Hey ... it's gonna be okay.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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15 posted 2000-09-04 10:39 PM


thanks Marge  
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16 posted 2000-09-04 10:58 PM


That how it works with Marge, Wilfred...somehow she always knows...she writes spiritual smoke signals...(serenity sneaks another hug...with winks atchya, Mom!)
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17 posted 2000-09-04 11:28 PM


Very beautiful, Marge!

Denise

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18 posted 2000-09-04 11:29 PM


Dixie~
Heartfelt hugs for you, my friend.

May the sun fall brightly on your morrow.
May all things come in soft array.
May friendship grasp your hand in love,
and walk you gently through this day.


LittleRennie~
You are worth all the 'spiritual' smoke signals in this world.
I thank you so - for being you.
See, Wilfred ...
We got a whole lotta friendship going on here ! !
~*Marge*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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19 posted 2000-09-05 12:24 PM



Oh Marge-
  This is sooo sweet and loving...and yes,
  so you.    Your poetry always brings a
  smile to my face and warms my heart.

  love ya,
      -vicky

"I have read your words, and within them
I have found your heart.
                 -vlraynes

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20 posted 2000-09-05 07:09 AM


Vicky~
Thank you so much for the sweet reply.
Friends give to others from the heart.
I'm pleased to know that you get a smile
and thanks for letting me know.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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