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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-09-04 09:35 AM


My Everything


You are my…
     Beautiful setting sun at twilight
     Feel of cool rain on a hot summers day
     Favorite blanket on a cold winters night
You are my…
     Favorite song that plays in my heart
     Warming thoughts of my future
     Feel of never ending hope
You are my…
     Moment of peace after a long day
     Love that grows in my heart
     Shining smile that seems to follow me
You are my…
     Flickering flame that burns eternal
     Beauty of the storm that rages in my soul
     Connection to forever lasting love
You are my…
     Escape when I need it most
     Protection from everything that is wrong
     Safety that keeps me feeling secure
You are my…
     Everything





[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-04-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-09-04 09:51 AM


RosePetals~
These are certainly lovely thoughts
to contemplate this morning.

Great job !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Beth
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2 posted 2000-09-04 09:57 AM


~Ah, lovely thoughts indeed.
I liked this!!~


~Cherie~

LM
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3 posted 2000-09-04 10:20 AM


AAhhhh..... Sweeeeeet....
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2000-09-04 01:34 PM


this is beautiful. Absolutely beautiful, simplitisic yes , it says everything.


Kathleen


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5 posted 2000-09-04 09:12 PM


Marge - Thank you for you nice words.. I'm happy you liked the poem

Beth and LM - Thanks for stopping to read.. I'm glad you enjoyed it

Irish Rose - Your wonderful compliment are very much appreciated.. thanks for stopping into read  

Mike
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6 posted 2000-09-04 09:20 PM


very nice... wonderful poem.
rosepetals25
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7 posted 2000-09-05 07:16 PM


Mike - Thank you I'm glad you stopped in and that you liked it.
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