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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I said I love you you said u love me too our love we share so true is a love of me and u forever is our love when you love someone like m e |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Why Insect~ This is just LOVELY ! Such creativity is to be applauded ! WONDERFUL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~I simply loved this.. As marge said 'Such creativity is to be applauded'...I agree totally. Great Work!!~ Beth |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
That’s what true love should always be And whom ever is lucky to find it Should lovingly cherish it For the rest of eternity Insect! You’re poem is beautiful! Visually and in every way. You must spend a lot of time on these because I tried writing one of my poems in a heart shape but every time I did… well, lets just put it this way, the heart looked more like someone had sat on it..  .LOL Your creativity amazes me and like I said earlier this was beautiful in every way! Keep doing what you do!  kat |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Marge Tindal…Thank you Marge You are ever so kind when you reply. Beth…Thank you Beth Very nice of you to respond also. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
WOW! kat you are a slippery one you got in before I could see your reply! Thanks for your sweet words as always I'm glad you stopped in Thank you |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Just caught this Little Grasshopper, you seem to be really getting into these artistic poems and doing a great job. Keep it up.... Parker |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Awesomeness!!! You creatively clever one. So sweet and visually pleasing. Terrific work. Take it easy I. *Peace. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Wow,I loved it a lot!!!!!! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Your creativity shines here Insect! Well done ... beautifully formatted and composed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
A most excellent piece of work... SBps. you were the only one I never got to give the answer to...for my riddle "A Mystery" so it went like this... the poem gave you the answer 3 times...with the statemnet...... So strange, it is a mystery. it was a mystery thanks again SB“The union of the mathematician with the poet, fervor with measure, passion with correctness, this surely is the ideal” |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Haleyja…Thank you your Haleyness! SpitFire…Thank you SpitFire I'm glad that you liked this! I put my heart into it! vandana…Thank you Thanks for giving me a smile! Here's a for you!Kit McCallum…Thank you Kit You just make me smile with those wonderful words! And here is a for you too!Steve B…Thank you Steve B I'm glad you liked this! Thanks for the answer, I thought it might be that but I didn't put it in. Everyone probably says that!! Had lots of fun with it. Thanks Check out "THE GAME" it's a poem I did in OPEN#7? ~ The graph is at the bottom of the poem. ~ Look at the graph first. Thanks for the 's |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Insect sometimes the most simply put things are the best and this is one of those times. Great poem. Sit down and bargain "Until your tongues are dry If the havoc and the shame continue We'll drown you in our putrefaction" Primo Levi |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Insect, Very creative my friend. Nice job here. Short and so sweet!! Great writing! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
brian madden…Thank you brian I'm very happy the way it turned out. Lone Wolf…First a for you!Thanks for the nice reply! Did you slide down any Rainbows today? Here take a few of these 's for later! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
simply gorgeous... sweet work here! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Insect, I found your poem the Game..lol very good.... 2.5 = "The" I see.....I guess I will have to post my "Riddles 3" they are three triolets, each a different and unrelated riddle, each harder than the previous, no hidden or trick answers , just straight deductive reasoning... give them a shot thanks again SB “The union of the mathematician with the poet, fervor with measure, passion with correctness, this surely is the ideal” |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
poutprincess…Thank you Dawn I'm very happy this is sweet to you *It is for anyone who wants to give it to their sweetheart. Steven B…Thanks for responding again! Thanks for reading THE GAME. Glad you got a laugh. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
insect, what a big heart you have  Enjoyed this muchly! ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
what a lovely heart it is..so cute insect |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful and just the kind of victim I was looking for....you sir will do just fine. Before I explain...I want to commend you on such a wonderful format AND verse. Lovely and I know there is a lady out there that is very happy because of you. Now for the rest of it.....my victim LOL.....IN the CHALLENGE forum there is a challenge that YOU should GRAB up rather quickly because you have shown your colors already ....now it has to be a NEW entry okay? Great my artistic friend... |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
chansondegeste…Thank you May your heart pump with love! And thanks for the smiles. Victoria…Thank you Lovely of you to say I like that "cute" thanks! Smiles to you too. Mark Bohannan…Thank you Mark for the kind response. I'm right here right now if you see her tell her to stop in and say hi. Sorry but my heart is showing. Now your challenge, I love this kind of stuff so I will work on something soon and try to get it out there before the challenge fades away but it really won't fade for me because I will try and do them from time to time even without the challenge. As I have done already. I'm glad that the RAINBOWS poem inspired you with colour and shape and I'm looking forward to seeing what the other poets come up with because beyond the words and meaning in what people write about it's always nice to see a visual treasure work of art with the words. And thanks for saying artistic that is a smile maker. |
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