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The Gene-racing Gap
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The Gene-racing Gap |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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A toddler's romp such grand cavort To challenge Mom such wondrous sport One blink of eye, her day is spent Yet nimble tyke's without relent "Slow down my child - You're out of sight' She calls her Mom with hopes to vent Their evening jog's time for lament But all's soon quelled for her consort As Nana sounds her own retort "Slow down my child - Run with less might" Then Nana with her Mom as planned In leisure stroll along the strand Meandering by ocean side Great-grandma can't maintain the stride "Slow down my child - You've too much spright." In geriatrics home reside Backs bent with age two side by side Great-grandma walks with cane in hand While Great-great-grandma steps with stand "Slow down my child - We have no plight." A lively child shall set the pace While Mommy vies to win the race And Nana moves a little slow Great-grandma even much more so But Great-great grandma's gone more laps She wins the Gene-racing Gap "Slow down my children - Get it right"  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 09-03-2000).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
slow down, ms. Nan!... your poetry's just too good!!! LOL... i LOVE this one! it's absolutely GRAND! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Nan.... Now that is a great piece of writing!!!! You covered all the generations and gave credit to a spunky great-great grandma!! Bravo!~! (I love the graphics!!) Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ This just tickled me. Don't have any of those GRANDS yet ... but I'm in training !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thanks, my friends... Doreen - I dunno about the poem, but I sure did think the theme was GRAND...  Sunny - Thanks - Great-great-grandma is now 97 years young - She forgets a lot - but she's up and doing laps with her walker - After a broken hip - She deserves to win... Marge - LOL - Thankee - There are varying levels of grand here - You must fall in there somewhere... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
fabulous, stupendous, wonderous... and btw... I liked muchly. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 09-03-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a wonderful read on this weekend to read. You have penned well and we are the benifactors of your talent and muse.  |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Nan, this one is very touching. I surely hope I live long enough to be waving that cane around at all the younguns running laps around me.  Seriously, I really enjoyed the flow and rhythm of this one, not to mention the message in an age when so many consider out-of-sight-out-of-mind when it comes to their elders. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent Nan! Delightful piece! What a blessing to have so many generations still going strong (although some a bit slower than others....hehehe)! I'm sure they will all love it too! Denise |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Mike - thank ya kind sir - Now get back to the detention hall... Mark - I think I'm the fortunate one to be surrounded by so many great poets.... Persnikitty - I envision you waving your cane about these forums long before you need to use it for walkin'... Thanks for struttin' by.. Denise - Thanks... hehe... they look younger and younger all the time... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Oh, believe me ... when I become a GRAND at ANY level ... this whole forum will know it !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your poetry is grand, Marge... |
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