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Our Dance---written with Joey
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Our Dance---written with Joey |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Come dance with me Barefoot in the sand The moon conducting the stars In a melody of light Your voice plays harmony With the wind rippling the sea Dancing in the dark Sweet dance of loves delight Your eyes an echo of the stars The music of your lovers heart Watching you dance As I play my guitar Fancy free and full of spirit Watching you twirl Reaching for the stars Images of you and a silhouette Lil bubbles across your feet As the waves roll in You walk on water and touch the skies How can it be we live different lives Watching and growing Together knowing That you are in this world with me Thank you Joey for all the gifts you give to me [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 09-03-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
very nice you two. Wonderfully done and sings like the wind across my mind. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula and Joey~ This is really quite lovely. I REALLY like this line - 'The moon conducting the stars In a melody of light' More !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, you two.....this is really wonderful, and full of romantic pictures!! A joy to read!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Very nice collaboration! Silky smooth and full of happiness. "Your eyes an echo of the stars"... beautiful! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...thank you Marge...thank you kind lady...this was our first attempt together and Joey is such a sweet guy lol Sunny1...Thanks me twin...We're glad you like it Trev...I know I tell you every time but it is such a joy to have you back...thank you so much |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Joey asked me to tell all of you thank you for him...he is not a poet here although I have tried my best to convince him his work is very good... |
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