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Rodney Belcher
Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

0 posted 2000-09-03 02:03 AM

Floating on the current
Ever gracefully
Effortlessly he climbs
Viewing his domain

Survival and providing
His only lot in life
He does his duty well
Insuring a future for his own

The wind may press against him
And try to impede his progress
But strength, determination
Will see him to his goal

On wings of eagles
We all strive to soar
Power and persistence
To carry all of us home

Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-09-03 02:14 AM

Rodney~
The majesty of the eagle on wing ...
nothing quite as proud and powerful !

You've captured him well.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2000-09-03 02:14 AM

Rodney, this was very visual, very breathtaking poetry. I liked it a lot.
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

3 posted 2000-09-03 02:57 AM

Wow! I love this one. Great visuals but I also see some underlying thoughts as well, perhaps that is just me though.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2000-09-03 03:00 AM

Beautifully done, Rodney.
Dee

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

5 posted 2000-09-03 05:42 AM

Majestic creatures, and you captured their grace in this piece.

Sit down and bargain
"Until your tongues are dry If the havoc and the shame continue We'll drown you in our putrefaction" Primo Levi

Rodney Belcher
Member

since 2000-06-06

Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

6 posted 2000-09-03 07:59 AM

Thanks for the replies all...and EagleOne..yes there is an underlying meaning...just that it can be hard today to be a husband and daddy...the odds sometimes seem like they are against you...but with determination and love you can do anything.

Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney

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