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Open Poetry #9

On This Journey

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2000-09-02 10:36 PM

On this journey,
on tiptoe,
I know I will slip,
but have to make this
trip, for to see
if I will please
myself.
On this journey,
I will find rough winds,
that will want to spin me
and send me to the ends,
but I must go.
On this journey
I will face many scrapes
but I'll escape
the thorns that are placed
for me alone.
On this journey
I will be scorned
but never torn
for I'll be sworn
to win
On this journey
that is life
I will live
and make the right turns
and a few wrong
but this is life
and so I must take in strife
on this journey
on my way home.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-09-03 12:01 PM

Aaaahhh the obstacles placed in our paths as we struggle through this journey ... you've described this well. Nicely penned Rosebud!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

2 posted 2000-09-04 10:34 AM

Life...definately has it's twists and turns!!
Nice piece!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-09-04 01:31 PM

I feel poetry helps us through our journeys. I enjoyed this.

Kathleen

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-09-04 05:17 PM

RoseBud~
A journey home is always worth the obstacles in the path.
You've written it well.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-09-06 01:14 PM

Life is a journey isn't it? thx guys, we all have our journey's through life, we all have our falls but the mountain top is filled with fresh air and bliss with each rising sun.

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