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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Dry drought dry tinderboxed growth of lost dew crackling tinderboxed growth of lost dew crackling foxfire cracking of lost dew crackling foxfire cracking nerve wracking crackling foxfire cracking nerve wracking tautly tensioned tinder foxfire cracking nerve wracking tautly tensioned tinder drought dry ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 2 September 2000 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent my friend. . . gave me the impression of that desert. . . Superb. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but in God's good times, we are not... fearful, I am... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great poem... I could see the layered waves of warm air one upon another... forming an illusion over the dry sands of a desert... regards, sudhir |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sunshine, what an effective use of imagery. Each line emphasized your theme, and the repetitive arrangement served to convey an urgency to your reader. This is excellent writing, dear. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, so glad you can see what we are dealing with... Claire, any comment ever elicited from you is a gift, indeed...thank you... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
pack of cards?  regards sudhir --- sorry bad attempt at joke...  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Supber,my friend!!!!!!!enjoy the read!!!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I've lived those drought spells. They are fearsome ... care needs to always be taken. A lovely write. I'm e-mailing you something. Love you~ ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 09-05-2000).] |
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