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Sunshine
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Purple Twilight < !signature-->In purple haze of twilight time he found her in seasoned rhyme he saw her form he caressed her face he took her to his strong embrace he loved her In daybreak's gleam he searched his room such was his dream now filled with gloom he loved her on the street in broad daylight he searched first left then to the right he scanned all eyes in those he found searching for the ones of brown he loved her his mind numb soul wracked with pain he went to his room to await again the purple haze of twilight time to find her in seasoned rhyme he saw her form he caressed her face he took her in his strong embrace and he loved her ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 2 September 2000 Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I don't even know what to say to this. I guess I just thought it was so sad that he was looking for her and couldn't find her, and I couldn't get past that part of it. Even so, I liked it, Sunshine. Elizabeth |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Elizabeth, that you cannot say anything, says a lot. Perhaps some day I will be of your caliber. Thank you. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Sunshine.....The title caught my attention!! I love twilight and the color purple!! Very sad piece.....but a very good poem!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Bridgette, kind words, I thank you... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sometimes, we search and find. . . other times, we search and find not. . . and still other times, we search and find too late. . . Superb poem my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, you speak for many and for many I say...look for the eyes of your love...that person is most likely looking right back at you... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hi Sunshine... My sincere compliments to you for an amazing poem you've penned here... Coco |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Morning Coco...and thank you for coming in to read... |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sometimes twilight casts just the perfect balance of sunshine - the better to see that perfect love...Lovely work here, my friend..  |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey Sunshine The title caught my attention, I loved it and the poem as well Oh and I like your nickname too [This message has been edited by LM (edited 09-03-2000).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
another well crafted poem from you, poet friend... he loved her? well maybe... sometimes it's hard to know... but i know this... you are a poet. yes. you are a poet and your poetry shines! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I know you know that I love this one. He loved her and yet tis only a dream His love trapped inside darkness of night No sunlight for his love it would seem Until destiny and patience end his plight Great write my friend. |
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Sunshine
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Nan, thank you for drawing the comparison... Hey LM...thank you for coming in...I too like good titles... doreen, I will take that comment and run to put it in my box of treasures, for it means that much...thank you... Mark, always a good sign of a poem well done when you come in and bring light to the sun... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A most excellent poem, this one as many many others... Karilea, you pen gems... regards, sudhir |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, sad but sweet, touching, beautiful. Dee |
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Sunshine
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Sudhir, many, many thanks... Dee, WELCOME, and yes, you hit all of the proposed highlights... |
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