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More Than Words.. (incase you have a better suggestion..)

rosepetals25

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0 posted 2000-09-02 08:46 PM

More Than Words

I raise my hand upwards,
Touching the side of your face
I see your eyes watch me,
And I get lost inside their grace.

I hear your gentle quiet voice
As you ask with a soft plea
I love you more than life.
But I wonder, do you love me?

My eyes smile up softly,
As my heart loudly sings,
And my lips move to ask you,
Why do you ask such things?

I take you in my arms,
My lips against yours to explore
A soft tender sweet kiss..
And if possible, I love you even more.

You know how much I love you
More than words can ever say
I need you here with me always,
And never shall I stray.

I really don't think this title fits. I've had this poem for sometime now.. but I had no idea what to call it.. so if you have any suggestions..HELP.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

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East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2000-09-03 12:34 PM

I like the title RP. . . it fits this very well. . . to have a love that doesn't need to be spoken. . . we all want that. . .

Excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

rosepetals25

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2 posted 2000-09-03 09:47 AM

Sven,

Whenever I say a title doesn't fit.. everyone says it does..lol. Maybe it's just me? Thanks for stopping by to read

rp25

boji stone
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since 2000-08-13

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3 posted 2000-09-03 10:10 AM

More than words.....
fits perfectly,

*S*
enjoyed
bj

~the breath, a mystery
of it's own ~~

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2000-09-03 10:56 AM

Good morning rosepetals25,
I'm glad to have dropped in this morning, as I have read your delightful poem. For a name, how about something like, "Loving Me"? This is what I felt as I read it.

rosepetals25

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5 posted 2000-09-03 09:07 PM

boji stone - Thank you for stopping in

Bill - I'm glad you stopped by to read

I will take your title under consideration.. I'm thinking Loving You too.......

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

6 posted 2000-09-03 11:30 PM

I agree with boji -and you should count your blessings every day - I'm very happy for you
and this poem is beautiful

rosepetals25

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7 posted 2000-09-04 08:46 AM

Wilfred - Believe me I do count my blessings. I know how lucky I am to find someone as amazing as I did. Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you stopped in

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