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chinaman
Junior Member
since 2000-08-26
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-09-02 08:31 PM


The child in me saw your sinful ways
I've lost in love but never loose this wonderful lesson
You're a ghost in disguise
ruining the tenderness in everyone
You crave for attention and attraction
which I've given you all along even nothing returned
I loved you with all my might
never realizing it would be a mighty blow
Love is a 2 way street which involves give and take
I'd die ultimately loving you and I'm sure of that
Death suffered from treachery of your evil ways



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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-09-03 05:46 AM


Chinaman,
Yes love can be treacherous, but it can also be an uplifting experience. I heard your poem and felt it deep inside.
Take care
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-09-03 11:04 AM


Welcome to Passions! You'll find inspiration, courteous people and a wealth of feelings and emotions here.
Good to have you.


Kathleen


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