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Sun Dance Haiku |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~SUN DANCE HAIKU~ 5-7-5 Passion in the sky vibrant flames tango with clouds cascading beauty *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams Melissa Monette [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Fabulous!!! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Yes this is a magnificent evocation...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Wonderful dancing Sunrays glow with sheer delight Shine fantastic beams *Lovely thoughts, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
As grand as sunny day Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a beautiful picture you've painted with so few words ... lovely Melissa! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone for your kind replies, I love writing haikus and this is one of my favourites Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"Vibrant flames tango with clouds" I love that line!!! Just wonderful Melissa. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Melissa Sun's burning off dross Blue sky echoing rainbows Summer's come again Excellent Haiku. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Kiss of golden ray upon billowed promises gently touches soul Loved this one alot.... really insightful. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-03-2000).] |
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boji stone Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 62USA |
i love it when a few words convey so much! *S* bj |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~MH,...mmm, loving this. Especially the tango part. How very neat! Take care. *Peace. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you to Sven, Kethry, Mark, Boji Stone and Spitfire, I am so glad that you like my haiku! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Thoroughly enjoyable~ ~Cherie~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Melissa,welcome back...havent seen you around for a while this is a strong comeback...I enjoyed it,esp the second line "vibrant flames tango with clouds" which made me smile |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Excellent! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thanks everyone for your kind replies Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderful work.... regards, sudhir |
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