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Toyy Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 16Reno Nv. |
I will Speak with your eyes I will understand you Listen with your heart I will tell you Flood me with love I will drink you Open your soul I will feel you Open your heart I will taste you Open your arms I will hold you Just be you I will love you |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Nice simple plea to love one in their purity. Very nice. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions, Toyy... This is a wonderful entree - Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Toyy~ Welcome to the posting side of Passions. A nice entrance. Please make yourself at home and read the works of many. Nice to have you here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Well done Toyy...a nice first piece |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Toyy,  Welcome to Passions What a simple and so sweet entrance to our world of poetry you have made. I hope to see more.rp25 |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Toyy! What a lovely and serene first post, tender and romantic ... I hope to read more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem! I enjoyed it and will look forward to reading more from you. Welcome to the family!  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Toyy, Welcome to passions. This poem was good enough to eat. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Toyy!!! welcome to passions.....this site is the best thing since Rock -N- Roll.... I hope you like it as much as I do...great choice for a first post...most people like 'em short and sweet with alot of meaning....and this is definitely that... although most of mine are rather long....anyway take care and I loved the post!!! Julie :) |
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Toyy Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 16Reno Nv. |
Thank you all for the warm welcome! I have been reading the poetry here for some time now and I do have my favs! I am hoping the inspriration will come back to me (dont know where it went!) Mark...Love and purity...hmmm nice but hard to find these days, thanks Nan...thank you very much for the email and greeting Marge, English Rose, rose petals, Kit and Poet Devine...thank you again for your kindness!! Kethry...PLEASE DON'T EAT MY POEM! Let me put it on an ice cream cake first! Thank you and you be well too JulieAnn...Thanks and I hope I put a smile on your face! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Great poem Toyy Welcome to Passions |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
i like this poem...so short and sweet...it made me smile when i read the final line  thanx. "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You made a grand entrance here with this poem - a simple, yet a very beautiful one at that. Love should be this way for always between two people. I look forward to more poems by you Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
welcome to passions....i like this poem alot...a little bit too happy for me but nice...hope you like it here Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Hello Toyy. Allow me to add my welcome along with the other poets I will be reading you --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! You've done a great job with this! Now that you've joined us, I hope to see more posts! Maybe that muse will come back |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~A lovely start made at Passions....Hope to see more of your works..~ Beth |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi TOYY... I WILL enjoy reading more of your poetic rhymes... Coco BTW this one is an embracing read! |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Toyy, a very fine beginning here at Passions. Welcome to a wonderful place. I hope to read more of your works in the future. Trev. |
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