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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-09-02 05:41 AM


Do not tremble my lady
when the rain fades away
Do not fall out of silence
for the difference today
Hands press for feeling
of moments that were made
Those presents we shared and kept
the night the moon came to play.

Do not tremble dear lady
for hearts still beat the same
Of destiny's we shall wonder
Yet our feelings do remain
The tears in your voice
of what has become again
A question of love
that you should have once more.

Do not tremble dear lady
for hearts content has given way
The nights rain is cleansing
like those showers that took our pain
And yes I wonder also
to look into your eyes again
To fall into your arms and smile
knowing this all today.

© Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

1 posted 2000-09-02 08:02 AM


So beautifully written... I loved it so much! Great one!

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-09-02 09:04 AM





Very beautiful indeed.  Your style and the easiness of your flow make your creations so wonderful to read.  I applaud your poem but I bow to your talent.  Well done.

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2000-09-02 09:10 AM


I love the repetion of the first line - how lovely!
And the whole poem is so well written by a talented hand
Superb!
Liz

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
4 posted 2000-09-02 11:39 AM


A difficult write for sure my friend.  Your heart is never hidden.

Hugs.....love ya,
Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Marsha
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
5 posted 2000-09-02 12:05 PM


Beautiful, such purity, and so well written. I stand humbly before the feet of a master, this is so good! Take a dream and craft it, and after setting it to perfection, this would be the result!  
Trew
Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada
6 posted 2000-09-03 07:33 PM


Very nice indeed!
Soft and well stated.  I enjoyed this one a lot!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

7 posted 2000-09-03 07:43 PM


touching and emotionally honest poem Michael,
once again you pen my heart as well...
dreams touched but not held...
what could have been, lost to what has to be...
damn I wish I didnt relate so well...
but then that is the reason your poetry
effects me so...
in time...it will all make sense...
take care my gentle poet of heart...
jm

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