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4 U 2U By Me |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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Well i was leaving and you were there and i was thinking maybe i could stay and if you give me just a moment then maybe you and i could leave here and make it real don't be scared i won't be there looking over your shoulder and i can deal with what you do and it's all i want from you so i was thinking we could be lovers you could see me when you are lonely and we could be just for a moment part.. of a fantasy would you like too? we don't really know eachother but maybe if we could just lose this crowd maybe then we could be what we are looking for and i won't ask you any questions swallow it up it's such a sour pill taken by my free will and if you'd let me i think i could maybe give too much would you push me away? would tell me to leave? i won't wear our hearts on my sleeve so i was thinking we could be lovers you could see me when you are lonely and we could be just for a moment part.. of a fantasy Julie :) |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Julie, Incredibly lyrical! A wonderful and refreshing poem. And just a little tart! It seems to have a dark undertone to it too. Perhaps that's just the hour at which I'm reading it (?). Either way, I enjoyed it a lot! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very nicely written. Summing up those feelings and putting them in a most uncomplicated way. Lovely write my friend. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Trew~~O Thank you so much....i wrote this in about 5 minutes very late last night,,,,it was the only way to get it out of my head... Mark...am I on a roll or what??? you sure are coming around alot lately,,,,,not that I mind or anything.....I dont think you could wear out your welcome....thank you for replying and i am glad you liked it.....  Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I never left...you were just SLEEPING! |
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