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take from me my senses please
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take from me my senses please |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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oh just for these few moments please do not give to me any more instead take from me my senses please take my sight at this moment I have no need of eyes take the taste of your kisses heaven memorized take the sound from my ears soft moans heavy breathing they need not be heard for wanting of this take the intoxication of your scent I am already over the brink take the softness and the hardness of your touch pure exquisite take from me my senses for these next moments please and let me think wholly on this very urgent need unisoned rhythm building passions as one pulsing pleasure to overload |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
YEOUCCCH!! Talk about a sense of urgency, passion and need...this poem is filled to the brink with emotion! Beautifully done... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
 'nuff said... Whew!! YES! |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
 yep what they said |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
take from me my senses for these next moments please and let me think wholly on this very urgent need unisoned rhythm building passions as one pulsing pleasure to overload ************************** Wow, Do I ever know this feeling? Beauty in motion Cor  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks all......glad to provide the heat |
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