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Chameleon Windmills
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Chameleon Windmills |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite Chameleon Windmills I smoke cigars, wrapped peyote With an appetite for vermouth. Sir, by name of Don Quixote A knight of dedicated truth. Charging on all pyric crafts Those dragon disguised windmills Of pate sophisticated drafts Playbill, waybill and pig swill. They log an acid cryptic pen Send fog onto the naive glen Hide the simple and mystify And vail the true. Of mice and men. Fire readers with non sense themes Spin innuendos picayune Swing a jamboree of dreams Tune moon shadows, into boon. I charge by knights might and right Within the smoked peyote light. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do NOT know how you do it...but I'm awfully glad you do! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sir Knight of the peyote dreams...the twists and turns are just spectacular |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Seems like peyote and vermouth would be quite the inspirational food for a muse!!!That would keep the knight charging into the night..........I loved this one, my friend!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
I remember reading this book in College days and there were parts of it that struck my memory, of mushrooms and alcohol, it painted quite some visuals. Nice read. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Good writing, Sy. Need a Sancho Panza along?  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Want a cigar? *L* Paula, Thank you so much. Sunny1, Thank you for loving this. Gemini, Thank you for the nice read. Balladeer, Sure I need a good man to carry the vermouth and cigars. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nobody I know can attack a verbal windmill like you do. Every line of this poem is magic and as Paula said, "Spectacilar" Your writing is so unique and wonderful Liz |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
excellent writing, Sy. very creative... doreen~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a good apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah! a Seymour extravaganza... I absolutely loved the title... excellent work... regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I think you are the wonderful one. Love Sy Doreen, Thanks for the creative. Sudhir, Thanks for the excellent. |
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