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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
building to last filled to mask driven in dreams bringing silence to the screams break like i do break like we do someone better quiet us down the ordinary is back in town because of you because of me EVERYTHING I'VE NEVER BEEEN creates the self absorption i NO LONGER NEEED be my light be all right be my light any way i look at this it doesnt seem ok everyway i lock away forget/ forgave /alive today |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Jackal, the ordinary is not back in town as far as this work goes, in fact its pretty extraordinary. I really liked it. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I enjoyed your work my friend. Good job.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
driven in dreams bringing silence to the screams break like i do break like we do someone better quiet us down the ordinary is back in town because of you because of me EVERYTHING I'VE NEVER BEEEN creates the self absorption i NO LONGER NEEED be my light be all right be my light =========================== when we find that light...we will indeed be alright... nice to read you once again Jac, and once again your poetry moves me.. and makes me think... whci is always a good thing... very cool poem my friend... written with your gift of emotional depth im on a bit of a break.... a muse sabatacle...of sorts... tho im not doing a very good job of staying out of here.... so much inspiration... if I miss your work.... i'll catch ya when i return take care...K  jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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