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Mystikal_Sacrament
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since 2000-08-07
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K.Falls,OR

0 posted 2000-09-01 01:01 AM




I watch the sun rise,golden it shines,
And in the distance i can hear pipes and chimes,
Music flowing through the air;searching for a listening ear,
Spreading itself across the land,just for one to hear,
The soft melody,the ringing chorus so clear,
They mingle with the air, bringing to my eye a single tear,
If you listen,beneath the pure sound of it all,
There lies a sorrow beneath each rise and fall.

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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-09-01 01:14 AM



Hello Mystikal_Sacrament.....

       I can hear the music!! You just described the church bells that are rung on occasion in a little town of Sitka, Alaska, in the Russian Orthodox church there.  They are truly beautiful, and actually play melodies that are sweet to the ear.
            wonderful poem!!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-09-01 08:00 AM


Mystikal Sacrament, this is a musical poem, I can hear it. So melodic.

Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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