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j_csgirl
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0 posted 2000-09-01 12:34 PM



In the dark
in the silence
you return to me

Your touch is there
the warmth we share
it's still here

miles between our hearts
are bridged everyday
with memories of moments

I want to cross the bridge
and get to the other side
but I'm afraid of heights

So I don't look down
I keep my eyes on your love
as you lead me across

slowly, patiently, sweetly
so that when I look up
I'm looking at you

** Im never afraid , when you're with me Jeffrey.
Thank you... for helping me across the bridge.


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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2000-09-01 12:40 PM


How lucky a man Jeffrey and you are lucky as well to have him.  Maybe BLESSED is a better word.  Lovely sweet and tender show of faith in your love.  
CocoBaci
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2 posted 2000-09-01 12:40 PM


JCGirl... this one is sooooo sweet it brings a tear to my eye reading the expression of your adoration and love for UknowWho  

Lovely poem thanx 4 the enchanting read


Sunnyone
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3 posted 2000-09-01 03:23 AM



  This is very lovely in it's tenderness.
  A beautiful tribute to love, love that
               is true!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



j_csgirl
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4 posted 2000-09-01 07:57 AM


Thank you for commenting.  It's hard to put such big feelings into such small words, but I'm doing my best to express the... the ahhh...mmm..see?? Out of words already  


Jeffrey Carter
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5 posted 2000-09-01 03:58 PM


Oh my!!!

My darling, You have no idea what this just did for me. You know sometimes I still find it hard to believe that I found someone so amazing, but what I find even harder to believe is the fact that you love me as much as I love you. There is another post coming for you very soon dear sweet POET of mine  

I love you,
Jeffrey

Jeffrey Carter
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6 posted 2000-09-02 01:28 AM


bttt for my baby  
Marina
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7 posted 2000-09-02 11:36 AM


I guess it just shows you that that saying is true.....Love can built a bridge......

Wonderful words.....

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Jeffrey Carter
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8 posted 2000-09-03 07:01 PM


Boy can it ever???

I'm still amazed by these words dear  

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