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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-09-01 12:31 PM


My Muse Is Hip Hopping


My muse is hip hopping to a cute little beat,
maybe that’s why my life is such a treat,
funny thing is were it’s coming from I do not
know, but who care’s I sure will enjoy
this dance and new flow.

The shy is blue not gray anymore, and my
nights oh a thing to explore.
The birds are all dancing to sweet melodies
and lily’s are swinging to the
awesome new beat. Friends are all wearing
big smiles so free and children are
for once listening to me.

My muse is hip hopping to a cute little beat
maybe that’s why my life is such a treat.

My step seems to take me farther these days,
my spirit feels light as a feather
and my health is not under the weather.
My to do list is now in the trash for it seems
like a day to just get out and play.
Why burden the heart with heavy-laden load
when the world is for some reason one
awesome show.

My muse is hip hopping to a cute little beat
may be that’s why my life is such
a treat. Don’t ask me why I do not care,
I just want to keep jumping up
and down in the air.

By, Cerenity





"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-09-01 01:03 AM


  

   Yes!!!!!!!  This is a keeper!!! I think your muse is one helluva great inspiration!! This just made me feel really good, and I feel like dancing!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



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2 posted 2000-09-01 04:47 AM


Cerenity~
You little cutie pie !
Get up and boogie !
You got it going on !
Love the upbeat to this one.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
3 posted 2000-09-01 05:43 AM


Cerenity~
     Hi, Dear!  I am glad that your Muse is having such a great time - mine seemed to have deserted me for a while to take a little nap.  But I hope she wakes up soon, for the only thing I found to write in the last couple of weeks must have come from one of her dreams.  Ask your muse where the party is, and I'll send mine over!!!!



Love Ya~


~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

sonjes
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since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-09-01 07:28 AM


This was fun to read...you made me think about muses not being so fuddy-duddy and more up to date.  I'm glad that you have a funky muse...does she have a friend for me???
  I think I am in need of a new model.  

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma


Diane Yvonne
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since 2000-08-22
Posts 36
Camdenton,Mo. USA
5 posted 2000-09-01 07:33 AM


Wonderful Read to start the morning with.
Made me feel like dancing.

Keep up the good work
Diane

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
6 posted 2000-09-01 10:05 AM


Hi Everyone,

Geeeez I don't know what came over me yesterday, I drove my family crazzzzy beep booping around, wore myself out in fact hehe. The mind is full right now and can't seem to write fast enough, and I wish this for all of you, because I know what it is to be drier than a bone and its not fun at all. Thank you all for your fun, happy replys.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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