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his dream. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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he sits in the window illuminated by moonlight writing his life his heart his soul his life is without love but yet the words he writes are who he is who he was who he longs to be he still believes in the dream one he hopes comes true and so he writes he sings he speaks but in a jaded world he is an outcast he is called a fake a phony a user his heart bears the scars of loves lost long ago and yet he goes on he still dreams he still tries his soul bears the wounds of judgements made of him and of the friends lost the loves lost the life lost and yet, still he writes because it is all he knows it is really who he is what he is this he is and so here he sits alone writing the dreams of his heart longing to be accepted to be respected to be loved in a world where dreams are daily shattered where lives are daily broken he still dares to follow his dream to follow his heart to follow his soul ----------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So sad dear Sven, but beautiful none the less and in many ways..... Isis *Our deeds travel with us from afar, and what we have been makes us what we are..* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
..very nice Sven, keep writing...you do it so well  Love, Marcy |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I believe this is not a dream, but the real thing here Sven. Very honest and sincere. I hope that some day, your dreams come true for you . . . I really do. Wonderful writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven...... This is so beautifully written and sincere. It's description seems to fit a lot of us, regardless of gender! Wonderful..... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ The writings from your heart will never be stilled ... and that's how it should be. Follow the dream and you'll find your heart resting in the heart of one who seeks the same dream. As always ... I enjoy your passion for writing from your heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is very heartfelt...i too hope you can recapture and live your dreams...i hope all is well for you again soon. ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
This piece is surly from the heart and if not seen as such: Then it is read by heartless souls… Very nice piece of writing here! And a wonderful expression of your feelings !! I agree with Sunny1.... If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
John...I enjoyed this much, as I have so many of your poems. As long as you continue to write, I will continue to read. This was one of the most heartfelt and sincere that I have read from you, and I mean that, without any ambiguities or innuendo. Peace. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
this is lovely writing Sir Sven... regards, sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Passionate and sincere. I breathe in your poetry and breathe out peace. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May you forever dream forever search forever write and find your dreams |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
My friends, thank you all for your comments. . . I wish that I could thank you all individually. . . but time prevents me from doing so. . . so, thank you all for your words and your encouragement. . . they mean a lot to me. . . as they always have. . . I will continue to write the only way that I know how. . . from my heart and from my soul. . . Thank you all again. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Sven your poem touched me so. A bittersweet piece to read, beautiful and full of the poetic mastery that only your romantic and hopeful heart posesses! A sadder piece from you, proving that you can bring any topic to life with your own unique flair. Email me if you ever need to talk ok! Take care, my friend, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
As your poetry is to Passions....... your heart and soul are a gift my friend. Though at times you may not see it, but they are. I wish you much happiness, my friend Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, Marina. . . Thank you both for your words. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed this one. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Incredibly beautiful Sven ... the flow and format reads wonderfully. Genuine and touching sentiments drift so softly from your heart to your pen. Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sven this touched my heart very deeply. I find myself sitting here with tears in my eyes. Your pen has served you well with this my friend. May you find your dream and be forever happy. Juls |
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