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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
of once adored ... in all our lives from beginning to end the path we take on others depend a woman of strength weakened by the fight led astray by the dark of some other's light a man of pride shamed by his loss hides his head at any cost with love's bond broken and rings put away never to harvest their lengthy stay but to look upon the day afresh with eyes anew from each is best to see the glory in resounded love to feel the passion again from above find your paths together once more return to love of once adored M.A. Miller 08.31.00 My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Very nice... "but to look upon the day afresh with eyes anew from each is best" To me this is a message of moving past our mistakes. I enjoyed this. -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Mark, what a difficult path that is...to try to get back that which you once had...but if you really love each other its a path well worth the walk...wonderful write here...and good to see you back |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
MA, you never manage to disappoint me with your poetic ability... so well done... regards, sudhir |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
It only stands to reason that on the day I write a free verse, you post a rhyme.  A very well done rhyme at that, MA. The simple structure a deceptive device, however, for there is much to ponder here. Take care, ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey what a wonderful creation you bring. To end up where you belonged in the first place after mistakes took you away would be the greatest gift of all. Shows truth and strength in your write. |
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